I’ve gone ahead and taken down the pages with the first three chapters of A Sword Into Darkness. One, is to make edits I’ve been contemplating for a while and I don’t want people to get the wrong impression from earlier drafts, and two, I’m making edits all through the manuscript to address some issues identified in more than one critique (the latest of which was Robert Fair’s — Thanks, Robby!).
So, fret not. It’s not becoming a completely different animal, just a leaner, meaner, more self-consistent blockbuster.
The next time you see it up, you’ll probably have to read your snippet on Amazon!